FIRST PLACE - POETRY

 

Eaten By An Alligator

By A. Hall

Indian Hills Elementary School

Topeka, Kansas

Teacher:  Kyle Nelson – Grade 5

 

 

I once had an alligator,

I fed him every day at four.

But one day I got home late,

And he was waiting at the door.

He rubbed his big old belly,

And he licked his scaly lips.

I knew I was in trouble,

So I offered him some chips.

He curled his tail around me,

And pulled me very near.

My expression changed from nervousness

To total, outright fear!

He opened up his mighty jaws,

And down his throat I flew!

This is why an alligator,

Belongs only in a zoo.


SECOND PLACE – POETRY

 

FEAR

By M. Orsburn

Bethel High School

Bethel, Oklahoma

Teacher:  Christian Herring - Grade 10

 

I hide in my closet scared and alone

I was six that year

The darkness still haunts me.

I remember the pain in my stomach,

the sting of the bruises still linger.

I can still see, peeking through the door.

Seeing my Mother sobbing on the floor.

My Father is coming towards me,

like thunder it seems.

His footsteps ease closer.

Once again an everyday routine.

He strikes me screaming,

His eyes burning like fire.

God please make him go away, that's my desire I hide in my closet scared and alone,
thinking of what might have been.

Now I'm not alone, I'm at home

and that's a good end

 

 



THIRD PLACE – POETRY

 

Never Enough

By S. Simonson

Fargo North High School

Fargo, North Dakota

Teacher: Marianna Malm – Grade 11

 

 

Why am I not good enough?

What advantage do you have over me?

I give up trying.

It is no use.

I can never be what you are.

You are a glowing supernova

Burning in the sky.

I am a dead star that never lived,

Only lived to die.

I want what you have,

But not by what you do.

I would never want to be you.

You are fake, a great pretender.

Your audience the borrower, you the lender.

Someday you will lend no more.

Then I may finally take up where you left off.

Someday when it doesn’t matter anymore.

When all the dust has settled on the floor of my dreams.

I can’t win now.

But the charm still gleams.


HONORABLE MENTION – POETRY

 

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By A. Noxon

Bethel High School

Shawnee, Oklahoma

Teacher: Christian Herring – Grade 12

 

When I go home at night

I play board games with my pillow

I really put up a fight

But I cant ever beat my pillow willow

 

I hate my pillow willow it always wins

Actually I like my pillow Willow in the end

When I get mad I leave in my Eclipse

The pillow begs me to stay and grabs me by my hips

 

I slapped the pillow and told him no

Willow slapped me back, please dont go

He never plays fair he always cheats

He will play anyone that he meets

 

My pillow Willow loves these games

It's sad my pillow puts me to shame


FIRST PLACE – SHORT STORY

 

EDWARD MICHAEL MCULAH

By J. Mayers

Elsberry High School

Elsberry, Missouri

Teacher: Anna Griffith Boley – Grade 11

Mr. Edward Michael Mculah laid flat on his back, constantly being reminded of his circumstances from the agonizing pain shooting through his back that was thanks to a lack of springs in a faulty mattress.  Roughly 6 feet above this lifeless figure was a paint-chipped ceiling that had been Edward's sole companion for nearly a full year now.  The scent of night slowly crept through the air as the last rays of the falling sun seeped through Edward's sorry excuse for a window.

          He looked down to the foot of his bed where his sandal covered feet pathetically swayed from left to right.  The sun sparked to life because of this movement, shimmering off Edward's cold steel bedpost.  These flashes of light were perhaps the only hint of beauty that remained in this gloomy place that had become his home.  Grabbing the grungy white sink to his left for support, Edward sat up and ran his fingers through his dampened hair.  Sweat from his brow trickled down his trembling face, avoiding patches of overgrown stubble and collecting in one large droplet at the base of his chin.  The sun now beamed directly at Edward's face, and although is brought a blistering heat, it was tolerated, and in fact, was enjoyed.  Edward had always felt that it was the warmest place in the World where he was.  And at that same time, he believed it to be the coldest.  To him, it was the driest and most wet place, the brightest and the darkest.  The most happy and the most disturbed.  To Edward Michale Mculah, it was the only place in the World.  It was cell 9, block C, in the Jackson County Maximum Security Prison and Edward had just watched his final sun die beneath the hills of the Alabama pasture.  His day had come. 

          Two and one half years ago, Edward committed 2 murders.  He had lived quietly in a little northern Alabama town called, ironically enough, Freedom.  The small community was one filled with rumors, kindness, and simplicity.  The place could easily be described as your typical town of perfection.  Every blade of grass in a deep green existence, every sky a crisp blue, and every shadow casting nothing short of an impeccable beauty against the most becoming brightness.  Trash was never littered across cracked streets, tears never fell from more than one eye at a time(meaning sadness was swarmed with friendship that could overcome the worst of occurrences), and the stars could not be overtaken by even the darkest of clouds. Yes, Freedom is perfectly describe as you typical town of perfection. Edward worked as a farmer, as did almost all the citizens of Freedom, and he made fairly well for himself.  However, these hollow rewards were nothing other than a hurtful reminder for him, because of course, it's an unpleasant life to live when you have no one to spoil with feasible belongings, or for that matter, spoils coming from the warmth of your heart.  .

          Both of Edward's parents passed away years before his life fell apart.  NO tragedies or horrifying accidents brought forth their demises, thus negating the clichéd profile of many convicts.  Old age just crept up on the endearing couple, and it could be well assumed that, while no one welcomes death, the two passed with nothing short of a smile on their faces. 

          To Edward, their death managed to come as both a blessing and a curse.  A blessing in that it kept his family, who he loved more with every beat of his heart, from seeing their beloved son who, for all practical purposes, voluntarily ended his promising life.  It was a curse in the obvious form of taking away the two people he cared the most for.   But also, thinking more allegorically, a curse in that his father's will forwarded an unwanted life to a beloved son.

          Edward had dreams, big dreams.  Dreams that strayed far from the small farming community of Freedom, and ones that were most certainly reasonable for a bright young man like himself.  Unlike any other Mculah, Edward had attended college where he studied law and one day planned of opening his own practice somewhere along the East Coast.  Resting in his dorm, he would fantasize about someday being a Supreme Court Justice, and never even considered the idea of farming.  The land could have been sold.  In fact, the will even spelt out such proceedings if Edward chose to do so.  The thought was unable to run through his mind though, and the land's passing would cease to comply with the morals of a loving son. Plus, he was not about to break four generations of tradition with selfishness about his own dreams.   

          "Eddie. Your dinner is ready."  Sully, one of the usual turnkeys, stood with his left arm rested on the bars, and his head curiously tilted to the right.  His deep brown eyes attempted to catch those of Edward's that had now seemed to escape this realm.  The were busy staring into the now night sky and that enormous rising southern moon.  Stars sparsely joined this moon in attempt to make Edward's last sky a beautiful and memorable one.  Slowly, and appropriately as Edward saw it, a shadow of clouds tumbled across nature's pallet, dimming the beauty of the tranquil night.

          Had he not directed his focuses to past efforts in life, Edward would have picked up on the scent of his last meal hours ago.  At this moment the tantalizing smell of barbeque flooded the air with such thickness it was as if the scent had taken on a new visible form.

          It was an extremely belittling process, this last meal.  Edward thought the idea stemmed from a lack morals and incapability to really value life; two characteristics that the common man believed all convicts possessed.  Although a man's last day to live cannot be enlightened with the most spectacular of occurrences, a favorite dish is a sad and sorry attempt at this impossibility.

          Just days after he was sentenced, Edward promised himself never to speak out against these apparent injustices.  No matter how hot the flames of anger burned within his being, he would manage to suppress it all, and see life with a heavy dose of perspective.  As he saw it, these injustices were nothing more than the everlasting effect stemming from his own forever-damning cause.

          Still sitting on the bed, neglecting to face Sully, Edward dipped his head low, positioning his chin against his chest, with his fingers interlocked behind.  A deep, hearty breath was gulped into his lungs.  This last meal was really the first step of the inevitable proceedings that would ultimately end his life.  Edward didn't want to comply with the instructions of Sully, a man who he considered to be one of his closest companions.  The twiddling of his thumbs and incessant tapping of his feet, made Edward's nervousness very apparent to Sully.  Knowing that the actual punishment wasn't for hours had no relevance on his immobility.  He refused to move because he wanted, more than anything, time to just sit and rest with him.  "Just ten more minutes of life." He thought, almost in the form of a prayer.  "C'mon now Ed, you don't want it to get cold on ya'."

          Sully was an extremely kind hearted man, a characteristic that was a rarity among most turnkeys.  He had become attached to almost all of the death row inmates, and because of this developed a tolerable hatred for his job.  It was almost a certainty that Sully's hidden heartache could be felt by all those around him on the night of an execution.  The story was no different on this night. While Sully's eyes still searched for Edward's, upon the second of their meeting, Sully would shy away quickly with a certain fear of letting a tear drop from his deep and affectionate eyes.  Edward possessed a special respect for the man, much like the respect an honorable son holds for an honorable father.  This was due solely to the fact that, even more rare than kindness, Sully would hold respect for you. 

          After slowing opening the bars, the affectionate turnkey gently grabbed Edward's arm, and even more gently escorted him from his cell.  Shackles were strewn between Edward's feet and hands to prevent a number of things; escape, violence, comfort, and, above all as Edward thought, to block out the idea of freedom.  Those shackles represented the power in America's legal system.  The power that takes the heart and soul from every man who undoubtedly thought, at one time or another, that he was invincible.  The theft of that heart and soul displays the appropriate vengefulness that America withholds for criminals.  Bringing lawbreakers to death upon their entrance cannot compare to these chains, for death does not reduce you to nothingness like constant restrictions do.  When your freedom, that quality that we all take for granted, is stripped away, nothingness seems to irritably fill the void.

          As he uncomfortably waddled to the dinning room, the sound of his chains consumed the awe-stricken silence of confused men, who possessed watchful eyes that prodded away at Edward's thoughts.  Curious looks from every passing inmate looked to Edward to set some sort of precedent for their own dreaded day.  The cell arrangements were changed monthly, flushing the next man in line further towards the end of the row.  Closer to the end, the faces were dominated by gloom and hopelessness, while those closer to the front showed nothing but fear and hopelessness.  While hopelessness seemed to be a lingering feeling throughout your last days, fear would manage to trickle away.  Perhaps the saddest thing about this place was that in time you began to accept, and sometimes-even welcome, death.

          Although Edward didn't exactly agree with the last meal idea, he chose to go along with the trend, and had his favorite dish prepared for this evening.  Sitting before him was a paper plate of baby-back ribs, ones that were doused with the elegance of Mal's Spicy barbeque sauce.  Steam blanketed the dish in an attempt to prove its freshness, and two five-inch stacks of napkins sat to the north side of the plate, waiting to be obliterated.  Edward's mouth watered at the sight of this meal, it had been so long since real meat passed through him.  These thoughts triggered something in his mind that made him understand the last meal.  When you have the constant repetition of nothingness, something unusual is quite liberating.

          In college, Edward attempted to be a part of a more high-end lifestyle and because of this, never thought baby-back ribs would evolve into his favorite meal.  It was the community of Freedom that really shaped this country life taste.  When he first took over the property, the kind hearted town insisted on holding some sort of a welcoming party.  According to the Freedom residents, it would be breaking tradition not to organize some sort of gathering.  With the heartache of, well everything, still fresh within him, Edward reluctantly obliged, and told himself he would try his hardest to embrace this newly established lifestyle.

          This hearty welcoming came in the form of a barbeque that was to be held at a Miss Janey Lee Masters home.  Janey Lee was the publicly adored homemaker, and privately despised gossip queen of Freedom.  She was the hostess or organizer of all the gatherings that were to be a collaboration of the whole town, and held this unofficial status with much pride.  It had always been this way in Freedom, and more than likely would stay this way until the day that Miss Masters passed on.  Its not that people feared standing against her, it was more that people avoided her for the sheer convenience of avoiding her.  Objecting to one of Janey's ideas or plans would land you a most aggravating penalty that would be headed by her relentless attempts to disprove you; a hassle that everyone in Freedom purposely dodged.

          Although her home heavily resembled all the other homes in Freedom, there seemed to be some type of soul to the house, a soul that screamed perfection.  Whether that be accredited to physical cleanliness, or an acquired lack of modesty from the head homemaker, perfection was definitely what the house screamed.

          The gathering had completely filled Miss Master's home with undoubtedly the entire population of the small farming community; all who shook Edward's hand with much respect and stared into his eyes with the most assured conclusion that he was the mirrored image of his late father; a compliment that with each of its mentionings took a heavy sigh and heartfelt compliance out of Edward.

          In an attempt to be the All American gem that his neighbors hearts so desired, he insisted upon helping out with the party's on goings, despite the fact that the party itself was being thrown in his honor.  Janey reluctantly assigned Edward to the job of taking frozen meat from inside the house outside to the barbeque pits.  After the cooking was done, the same plate, now with cooked meat, was to be brought back inside where it would be sauced, seasoned, and sent back outside for serving.  These were the requests, or orders really, of Janey Lee, and had they not been precisely followed there was a fairly good chance that Edward would be kicked far from Freedom by none other than Janey's own ballistic boot. 

          The clouds can cast over a man with such haste in a day that seems to be filled with nothingness.  People never leave nothingness in their minds, reserving the space, instead, for memories that possess high levels of value, so one can suppose that's why a meaningless day seems to fly by with such unmatchable speed. Such was the case for Edward, on his day of welcoming, and the entire celebration had passed without one instance of real time.  Freedom still breathed the fresh breath of existence, it did not die with the sun, but the stars had begun to shimmer, and the day was coming, thankfully as Edward saw it, to an end.  The night was never forced on Freedom.  Never were the sun's glowing rays selfishly shadowed out by a rising moon.  Instead, the two seemed to cooperate in perfect unison, giving way to one another as a downpour does to a rainbow.  Edward could watch, he could sense the beauty in this transformation from day to night, he could see the stars begin to shine, he could see the powerfully red clouds gather at the base of a setting sun, but he could not feel the phenomenon.  He was but a soulless man watching the World's most beautiful spectacles being flaunted before his lifeless eyes. 

          Countless strangers had surrounded Edward all day with relentless efforts to cheer him up, or to sympathize for his loss with words that avoided emptiness but were unable to escape a label of meaningless.  But he was not searching for sympathetic encouragements of life, he was searching for nothing at all.  It could be said that Edward was hoping, yes hoping, for someone, something that could restore his grasp on reality.  At that moment he felt as if he were the only man on Earth who felt sadness, who felt grief; an isolation that might as well have pinned him as the only man on Earth at all. 

          Men were still scattered across Janey's impeccable lawn, reaping the benefits of a particular brand of over consumption.  Edward would wonder to himself if within a year he too would fall into the ways of these men who sat before him.  Whose lives came to climax years ago, and now relied on substances to convince themselves that life still possessed its "spunk."  As previously stated, the day passed without one instance of real time.  Names, stories, and hugs had all ceased to exist as separate occurrences, falling hopelessly together in a category that Edward hoped to soon forget.  He was bringing empty plates into the kitchen, his last set in fact, when something made him stop.  The sun had fallen, and, realizing this, he looked to the sky.  Nothing special hung from God's most beautiful masterpiece, no falling stars or northern lights.  But for the first time since his parent's death, Edward noticed the stars.  Despite all the destruction, all the changes, all the sadness of a million compelling hearts, there they hung, sparkling smiles down to their observers, with the promise that life could go on.  So many things Edward saw in those blindingly beautiful lights of the night sky.  His mother's eyes, his father's smile, his relentless dreams, and even his hope.  Perhaps it glimmered as nothing more than the most faint star in the brightest sky, but nevertheless he saw it, and for the first time since tragedy, beauty was welcomed by Edward with a smile.   

          He stepped into the house with a becoming sense of optimism, optimism that seemed to come spontaneously, but optimism that he was not about to question over its origin.  The house was becalmed with a silence that, for some unknown reason, sent the most swift set of chills up and down Edward's spine, a feeling that was heartily welcomed with a slight smirk.  His legs swayed smoothly across the carpet as he walked, and the pattern rekindled the flames of some song that rested quietly in hid mind.  "I'm in heaven, I'm in heaven, and my heart...,"  and so he sang, the most delightful tune of happiness over love's ways, "when we're out together dancing cheek to cheek." he finished.  Upon the tunes completion the loudest bang rang out from behind the closed doors of Janey Lee's kitchen.  Embarrassed over his misconception of the home's emptiness, Edward hoped with all his might that the Alabama winds caught hold of a plate, and that the sound was nothing more than that. 

          He stepped through the swinging door, and plopped uncomfortably upon the floor was, much to Edward's dislike, the graceful body of a woman.  Sprawled in all directions before her were shards of broken glass from the apparent stack of plates that she was juggling.  One plate was, depressingly enough, still clinched tightly in her hand, and in a fit of frustration she smashed the plate against the ground.  "No need to leave him out I guess, huh?"  Edward had started the conversation, his first of the evening.  The young lady seemed to be no older than 30, and 30 was a stretch.  She wore a conforming outfit of jeans and a blouse, and chuckled a bit at Edward's words.  Her golden blonde hair was left down and it swayed before a glowing pair of green eyes. "She's beautiful."  Thought Edward.  He saw her beauty in those eyes, in that hair, in her displeasure that seemed to be the most common of links between the two of them. 

          "Let me help you up Miss." he said extending his hand.  "My name is-"

          "Edward, Edward Mculah."  she said, shaking his hand and taking the obvious words right from his mouth. "It'd be awful impolite of me if I didn't know the name of the man whose party I was attending.  My name's Arlene Harrison."

          "Pleased to meet you Arlene.  Looks like you had a bit of trouble here?"  Edward bent down and began gathering up the shattered dining wear.

          "Likely that Janey will kill me, yup, she'll kill me dead." 

          "Oh now don't be silly, Janey-Lee seems like the sweetest lady," the two's eyes met in an agreement of sarcasm.

          "Its just a few plates, not like you broke the woman's neck or anything."

          "Don't give me any ideas there Edward, wouldn't wanna' make you my accomplice.  Was that you singing just a moment ago?"  she asked casually, as if she didn't expect Edward's embarrassment.

          "If I told you no, would you go ahead and believe me, I'd consider it somewhat of a welcoming present."

          "No need to be shy.  Hey, at least you didn't break the "Queen's" belongings." Upon the ending of her words, Edward snatched up a serving dish, roughly a foot in diameter, and smashed it against the chair he was leaning on. 

          "Now there's nothing to be excluded about."  He said, as the two erupted in laughter. 

          Edward now found himself reduced to tears over his heartfelt trip down memory lane.  The clouds had gathered outside, and he sat along side his window, crying tears equivalent in their magnitude to the downpour that Mother Nature was displaying outside.  Such beauty was held firmly within those raindrops, and again, nothing but soulless eyes to greet them.  Their pitter-patter against the cold asphalt possessed no pattern that gave it the beauty of a well-orchestrated song, and although the rain lacked this characteristic, it was this disorder that gave the phenomenon such splendor.  The knowledge that so much beauty could in exist in a chaotic occurrence such as drops of water spontaneously falling from the sky. It is enough to almost fear the beauty of God's planned occurrences, and it instilled even more fear into Edward's heart of God's planned displeasures. 

          The full moon hung high in the sky, above Edward, above his worries.  It would beam down its brightness the following night, when Edward would live as nothing more than a memory. This projection forced yet another worry upon this story's main character.  Perhaps the biggest question, or hope really, that we all face as human beings can be found within the dark barricades of what many would call human flaw:  selfishness.  Edward couldn't help but wonder how those who still remained on this green earth would think him of.  Fear oftentimes pushed Edward away from answering this question because, of course, if the world lacked remorse before his death, why would they gain the feeling after he was gone? Life was fragile; Edward knew it.  But he hoped and prayed with all his heart that the broken shards of his life would be picked up and perhaps placed together by someone after this evening.  Yes, this was what he prayed.

          “Mr. Mculah?”  said Sully as he genially leant against the bars.  “It seems you have a visitor, a Mr. Thomas Roseburough.” Thomas Roseburough was the town lawyer of Freedom, and perhaps the only man in the world, besides the turnkey just five feet away, that held sympathy for Edward.  The two had become acquaintances shortly after Edward moved to Freedom.  Their relationship was somewhat built around Edward’s desire for Thomas’ life.  He stepped passed the barred barrier slowly, acknowledging Sully as he did so with a slight nod of his head. He wore a khaki colored trench coat that hung far down past his knees.  The shoulders of the jacket were darkened with the water that was still falling from the outside world, and a few remains from the downpour existed shakily on Thomas’ brow.  Yet another characteristic that Edward found himself in envy of, oh what he wouldn’t give to feel the rain one last time. 

          “Edward.”  Said Thomas as he exhaled a deep and hearty breath.  “I just got off the phone with a few people I know down at city hall. Well, I—there’s no word yet, but, I mean, Edward, anything cold happen.” His words held the most weary amount of confidence, a confidence that slithered away even further with each passing syllable that quivered from his dampened lips.

          “Things can change in an instant, Edward, and it’ll only take an instant to change your world.”

          “I know Thomas, I know.” 

          Both men’s heads were drooped low, in the position that most often welcomes sorrowful times.  IT cannot be said that Edward believed he would win his case, and the dire last minute pardon seemed to also be nothing more that a fainted fantasy.  It can, however, be said that Edward did not expect Thomas’ visit.  His presence would have only been a necessity if there were question marks still encompassing Edward’s situation.  Such presumptions had all been answered though, so Thomas was nothing more than a friend in this instant.  He walked passed those bars not to consult a client, or to give false hope to someone who had entrusted him.  No, he walked into Edward’s cell as a man of comfort, as a companion, and as a friend, the only one that existed currently in Edward’s world.

 


SECOND PLACE – SHORT STORY

 

A Bond of Hearts

By E. Kenner

Central Middle School

Devils Lake, North Dakota

Teacher:  Mary Jean Olson – Grade 5

 

“Oh, no!” I screamed as I stepped into my room. Papers were scattered, books were off the shelves, crumbs lay in my bed, and there in the middle of it all, my little brother Peter sat, a devilish grin on his face.

My mom burst in. “What’s all the ¾ Sarah, what happened in here?”

I took a deep breath. “Mom, Peter messed up my room.”

“Oh don’t be silly,” Mom said, “he’s only six. He couldn’t possibly do all this.”

Wanna bet?” I replied. “Besides, Lizz is gonna be here in two hours.” Lizz is my best friend and tonight she was sleeping over at my house.

“I suggest you start cleaning then,” Mom said as she picked up Peter and left leaving me with the mess.

Arrrrr!” I screamed. “Peter the menace strikes again.” And I tossed a shirt in my closet.

Lizz came around 6:00 and after dinner we ran up to my room to watch MTV. Halfway through the show Lizz asked me the dreaded question. “Truth or dare?” she asked.

Ummmm ... truth,” I replied.

“Okay,” Lizz said. “Do you have a secret crush on anyone?”

“You promise you won’t tell if I do?”

“Cross my heart hope to die,” Lizz said.

“Okay, I’ll spill,” I replied. “I do.”

“Who?” Lizz asked.

“Matt Boisenberry,” I said.

The next morning while Lizz and I were eating breakfast, Peter came running down. Still in his dumb cowboy pajamas. He ran up to me and whispered in my ear, “So, how’s Matt looking today?”

“You little sneak!” I screamed and started chasing him. I cornered him and twisted his arm. “Stop it!” he begged.

“All right you two...enough’s enough.... QUIET!” Mom yelled. “Settle down and eat your breakfast or you’ll miss the bus. Oh, and Sarah, I have to work late today so remember to bring Peter home after school.”

I figured that I better not argue. “Sure, mom,” I muttered, and started to eat again.

Right after math class I headed to my locker to grab my lunch when I saw Matt walking toward me. He stopped. “Hey Sarah, wanna come to my place after school?”

My heart stopped. I couldn’t speak so I just nodded.

“Cool,” he said.

Then I remembered Peter. “Wait!”

He turned around. “I have to take my brother after school.”

“Oh that’s okay, he can hang with my little bro.” Matt said.

“Thanks,” I replied and ran to tell Lizz.

After school I picked up Peter and told him where we were going and that I’d give him a dollar if he didn’t say a word to Mom. “Okay,” he agreed. We met up with Matt on the playground and started walking to his house. It felt like it was a two-mile walk even though it was only two blocks.

I was too nervous to talk so we walked in silence, Peter trotting along behind. We finally got to Matt’s house, a big Victorian brick house. I walked inside after Matt and found his mother in the kitchen.

Matt introduced me to her. “Mom this is Sarah, one of my friends from school. Sarah, this is my mom,” Matt said.

“It’s nice to meet you, Sarah,” Matt’s mom said.

“It’s nice to meet you, too Mrs. Boisenberry,” I choked out.

“And who’s this little fellow?” she asked.

“This is Peter, my little brother,” I replied.

Mrs. Boisenberry turned to Peter. “How would you like to play with Matt’s brother Jake? He’s about your age.” Peter turned to me. I nodded.

“Sure,” Peter said.

“Okay, I’ll get him. JAAAKE,” she called.

A small, blond boy who looked about six came running down the steps.

“Jake, this is Peter. He’s about your age. Why don’t you go play on the trampoline?”

They both ran outside. Mrs. Boisenberry turned to us.

“You two can watch TV in the living room. I’ll be right here if you need me.”

We did what she said. Halfway through the show we were watching Matt started inching closer to me…. just slightly. Suddenly Peter and Jake came running in.

Peter spoke loudly. “Guess what?”

Matt stopped. “What?” Matt asked as if he was talking to a one year old instead of my annoying six-year-old brother.

“Sarah has a crush on you and she wants to marry you.”

I felt my face grow hot.

“We should get home, Peter,” I said and grabbed his arm hard. He struggled to escape but I was too strong and determined to go. I dragged him out the door and started heading home. I didn’t stop until we got there. But if I would have known what was waiting for us inside, I wouldn’t have gone near my house.

“WHERE DO YOU THINK YOU’VE BEEN? I WAS WORRIED SICK!” Mom yelled as soon as we walked in the door.

“At a friend’s house, Mom. That’s all.”

“No, that’s not all. You didn’t leave a note, you didn’t call me at work, you left no sign of where you were. Do you even know what I felt like when I came home and found the house empty?

“But Mom ¾

“But nothing young lady. You’re grounded for to weeks. No TV, no phone and no computer. Now march straight up to your room to think about what you did.

The next day during history class the teacher told us that we would be making pyramids. He said it would be worth a quarter of our grade.

“That’s a big project,” he said. “I expect your best work.”

BBBBBBRRRRRRIIIIIIINNNNNG. The school bell rang. “Okay, class, that’s all for today. This weekend I want you and a friend to brainstorm ideas for your pyramids. See you on Monday.”

Lizz asked if I could stay over at her house to think up ideas for our pyramids. “Sorry,” I replied, “but my mom grounded me for a whole two weeks for going to Matt’s house without asking first.”

“Harsh,” Lizz said.

I nodded. “No TV, no computer, and no phone,” I mimicked.

Lizz laughed. “I’m sure you’ll think of something to do, Sarah.”

“I hope you’re right,” I said and got on my bus.

When I got home I stepped into my room and found Peter sitting on my bed, reading my diary. “OUT!” I yelled. He looked up, saw me, and ran away. I lay out my schoolbooks and started doing my homework. 12 divided by 6, I read. Duh. 2. This is going to be easy.

At 6:30 mom called me down for a supper of spaghetti and meatballs. I ate silently.

“So Sarah,” My father asked. “How was school today?”

“Okay,” I replied.

“What are you doing lately?” He made a second attempt.

“Nothing.” I said.

He finally gave up with a sigh and started eating again.

After dinner I went to my room and started reading a book called The World’s Best Poems. “Uh,” I said as I started to read. “This book should be called The World’s Most Boring Poems.” I fell asleep soon.

The next morning I got dressed and went downstairs where I found Mom in the kitchen. “Hi sweetie,” she said. “You’ve been really good lately so I decided to take you to the art show.

“Great,” I thought. “Just what I need. Going to listen to a bunch of snobby rich people talk about how wonderful their paintings are.”

We went to the art show after breakfast. Mom and I walked around looking at the different booths. At one of them the paintings looked like the artists had handed their babies a crayon and paper and let it go from there. I managed to suffer through the art show and come out not having died of boredom, which was my top goal. The day pretty much dragged on after that.

On Monday our teacher told us to start working on our pyramids. We had three weeks to get them done. We all started getting ideas and writing them on the board. Then we went to music class. I hate music class. I don’t really understand the notes. But other than that the day was pretty normal.

After two weeks went by I decided I’d better start working on my pyramid. I was feeling a lot better now that I wasn’t grounded anymore. I saw Matt in the hallway at school the other day. He’s so cool. He didn’t even act all jerky and conceited like most guys would. We just talked for a while before we had to head to lunch.

Now, back to my pyramid. I started out by drawing out the plan for it. I actually got some pretty cool ideas down before my mom called me.

“Honey,” she said. “Your father and I are going out to dinner .We want you to watch Peter. There’s money on the fridge for you to order pizza. Just call my cell phone number if you have any problems.”

I didn’t have any time to work some more on my pyramid that night. Peter kept me busy and by the time Mom and Dad got home I was too tired to even talk.

The next day after school I realized that I only had until tomorrow until I had to turn in my pyramid. I worked for like three hours on it and finally got it done. It looked awesome. It even had little Egyptians. 

Peter burst into my room. “Cool toy, Sarah. Let me play with it!”

He lunged toward it. “Oh, no you don’t!” I said, and caught him just in time. “This is not a toy, and if you go near it consider yourself dead meat. Do I make myself clear?”

He nodded and angrily walked away grumbling. Then Dad called me down to take out the trash. But when I came back to my room I found Peter sitting next to my totaled pyramid holding one of the Egyptians in his grimy little hands.

“You little dweeb! I told you not to touch my pyramid! Now it’s ruined!”

He started to run, but I caught him. I pinned him down.

“You are a stupid, good for nothing brother You’ve messed up my stuff for the last time. Now you’re gonna get it!”

Dad came in. “Sarah, what are you doing? Let your brother go...now!”

I had to give up. I had been caught in the act.

“We were going to go to the movies but I guess now you can just stay home. You’re not going after I come up and see you doing this!

I had to start my pyramid all over again. It took me over three hours to do. I hid it under my bed so Peter wouldn’t get to it. Then I went downstairs to have cake with my family.

The next day I found out Peter wasn’t going to school today. He was feeling sick.

“Probably had too much popcorn last night,” Dad said. I could imagine Peter sitting at the movies stuffing his face. I laughed to myself. I grabbed my pyramid and headed to school.

 “Please turn in your pyramids and I will grade them by tomorrow,” said our teacher. “And now we will start language arts.”

His voice kind of droned on. I was paying more attention to the note that was heading my way. It got to me. “From: Matt,” it said on the front. I opened it.

“Want to eat lunch with me today?” it read. It had the words “yes” or “no” at the bottom. I circled the “yes” and passed it back. Matt got it and smiled at me. I kept my eye on the teacher even though I was thinking about lunch.

Finally the lunch bell rang. I rushed out to my locker to grab my lunch. Matt met me and we walked out to lunch. We talked for a while. Just about things like the school lunch food, kids in our class, stuff like that. Soon lunch was over. We both had to go back to class even though I wanted to stay and talk.

I went home and found that Peter was still feeling sick.

“I’m taking Peter to the doctor. Will you be all right?”

“Yeah Mom, you left me home for two hours last night. What makes you think that I won’t be all right for half an hour?” I replied.

Mom sighed and left. I just watched TV for a while when Mom came home

“Where’s Peter? I asked.

I could see a small tear in her eye. “He’s at the hospital,” she replied. “The doctor is testing him. Peter has cancer.”

I couldn’t talk. I felt dizzy. I had to sit down.

“What!”

Mom was sobbing too hard to answer now. I had a million thoughts in my head. How could Peter have cancer? He’s just six. He’s too young. Then I remembered how mean I had been to him.

“I’m scum,” I said to myself. “I’m lower than scum. Now Peter is lying in the hospital with cancer and the last thing I said to him was that he was a stupid good for nothing brother.” I felt tears start to run down my face. I started to cry and I didn’t stop for two hours.

The next day I didn’t talk at all. I was too scared and sad to. In music class I heard someone say it was their brother’s birthday today. At the mention of brothers I started sobbing like crazy. The music teacher had to send me out to the hall until I calmed down. When I got home I asked my mom if we could visit Peter.

“Of course we can, honey,” Mom said and we got in the car.

When I saw Peter lying in the hospital bed, I couldn’t hold back my tears.

“May I go in?” I asked.

Mom nodded.

I stepped in the room. “Hey Peter,” I said.

Peter didn’t talk.

“Peter, I’m really sorry I said those things to you. I was overreacting I guess. It wasn’t your fault. I should have taken time to explain that my pyramid wasn’t a toy. You’re my little brother and that’s what little brothers do. I just want you to know that all I want is for you to get better. That’s all.”

I turned to leave when I heard Peter’s faint voice.

“I forgive you.”

I turned around and gave him a big hug.

“Stop,” he said, wiping his cheek where I kissed him.

Wanna play Candyland?”

“Sure,” I replied. We played about 50 games. Finally the doctor came in and made me leave. He said Peter needed his rest.

“I’ll come back,” I told Peter. “I want a rematch at Candyland. I’m gonna beat you next time.”

We both laughed as I left the room. Even though I was still sad for Peter, I left feeling lighter than I was before.

The next few weeks kind of droned on. I kept visiting Peter after school. Sometimes he was asleep so I just sat by his bed for hours at a time. We played a bunch of board games and talked for what felt like forever.

But I heard that another patient in the hospital had died of cancer the other day. It sent me into the realization that Peter could die too. Maybe I was overreacting, but maybe not. Maybe Peter won’t stay in this world as long as we thought!

Saturday, finally! I needed a break. Dad took me to the movie theaters. I saw this weird movie about a flying pig.

Lizz invited me to a sleepover. I felt really grateful that she still wanted to be my friend after I’ve been avoiding her. When we got home I packed my overnight bag and headed over to Lizz’s house. We just hung out. Looked at magazines, listened to music, and pigged out on junk food. It felt good to relax and get away from all the stress of everyday life.

But all of a sudden I got a call from Mom. She was coming to pick me up. The doctors found out which blood type Peter needed to go on with the bone marrow transplant...Mine.

I went to the hospital with mom and checked in. The receptionist told me to go into room 276.

The doctor was in there. I entered the room slowly. I sat down with mom on a small sofa in the corner. Dr. Flemsin (Peter’s doctor) came out from a curtain near the wall.

“I suppose you know that your blood type matches Peter’s.”

I nodded.

“Sarah, now you have a choice to make. You can donate your blood for Peter’s bone marrow, or you can choose not to and we will keep searching for other donors with a match although we might not find any. The choice is yours.”

I gulped. “I’ll do it,” I said.

“You sure?” the doctor asked.

I nodded.

“Very well then. You will need to go through a small surgery. We will begin next week. Is that all right?”

“Yes.” I replied.

“Okay. You are free to go.”

I nodded and I walked out of the room.

Report cards came today. I looked at my grades. Spelling: A. Math: C+. Music: B+. Gym: A. Social Studies: A. And science: A.

I smiled to myself. The only grade I didn’t like was math. But if I did a few extra credit pages I’d be fine. I still had this bad feeling inside about the surgery. What if it didn’t go well? What if the bone marrow wasn’t successful? What would we do if Peter didn’t get better? All I could do was wait and pray that the surgery went well. For Peter’s sake.

Finally a week went by. I went to the hospital to begin the surgery at 1:00. Pretty soon I was lying in the hospital bed. The doctor told me that he was going to put a sleeping gas on me. He told me to relax and count backwards from 100.

The next thing I knew I was lying in the bed awake with this terrible pain in my leg. I saw Lizz standing next to my bed.

“The doctors are giving Peter the bone marrow,” she said. “They’ll have the results soon.”

I was still a little drowsy from the medication but I understood perfectly what Lizz said.

“Thanks Lizz,” I said, “for coming over here.”

“No need to thank me. That’s what friends are for.”

“I’m going to need a wheelchair to get around school you know.” I said.

Lizz nodded.” Well look on the bright side. You get to ride the elevator!”

I laughed. That’s what I like about Lizz. She’s always looking on the bright side of things. What she said was true though. Everybody wants to ride the elevator at school and I would get to. At least until my leg heals.

As soon as the doctor came in I started flooding him with questions. “Is Peter okay? Did the surgery go well? How’s he doing? Can I see him?”

The doctor held up a hand. “Peter’s just fine. The surgery went perfectly. Although you two will need to stay in the hospital overnight. You can go home tomorrow.”

At that moment I felt a surge of happiness. Peter was better. The surgery went well. Nothing in the world could bring me down today. Nothing.

After a few months every thing went back to normal. Peter was now running around the house creating messes just like before. And I was still hanging around the house, talking on the phone, e-mailing my friends, etc.

But one thing had changed. Ever since Peter got cancer, we had developed a special bond. Not the kind of bond between you and your best friend. A brother and sister bond. A loving bond. A bond of hearts.


THIRD PLACE – SHORT STORY

 

Wisps of Darkness

By A. Hanley

Brewster Schools

Brewster, Kansas

Teacher:  Delores Depe – Grade 9

 

Mcayla was only six when she realized that she was smarter than her parents. They had been the worst parents imaginable. They each worked minimum-wage jobs at the local burger joint. Each day Mcayla would wake up, walk into her parents’ room and wake them up. Without her waking them up, they would never have made it to work.

          Each day, as she prepared to go to school, she would help her parents get ready for work. At the age of seven, she was ironing her parents’ clothes, packing their lunches, and finding them a ride to work each morning. Of course, to her this was normal. By the time she reached eighth grade, she was doing calculus in school. When she was a freshman in high school, she graduated, with honors. People were amazed. At first, people thought she had cheated, making her take all the tests over again. When she did even better the second time, scoring perfect scores, they decided she was not cheating and deserved to be awarded with the highest State scholarships possible.

          People from all over the country were calling her, hoping she would come to their college, or that she would pick their scholarship. Before she even had a chance to pick a college or a scholarship, something amazing happened. Not a good something, either.

                                                                                                                                                                   ***                                                                      

Mcayla woke up, slipped on her slippers and walked down the hall to her parents’ room. She slowly opened the door and walked in. The large lump under the covers reassured her parents were still in bed, as usual. She walked over to her mother’s side and lightly tapped her where she figured her shoulder would be (she could not tell because

her mom was deep under the covers). Her mother did not stir. Mcayla shook her this time, though not enough for her to become angry when she woke up. When that did not work, Mcayla lifted the covers.

          The most horrible sight that she had ever seen reached her eyes. Her mother was curled in a fetal position at the bottom of the bed. Blood was specked all over her body. Most of the blood seemed to have come out of her ear. It trickled down the side of her face and ended up in a big puddle on the once-white, lace sheet.

          Her father was not in the bed. She walked around the bed, her eyes not leaving her mother’s body. She stumbled over something on the floor and fell over. Her hands landed in a wet and sticky substance. She slowly raised her hand into the light and saw a red droplet fall slowly off her hand and splatter as it hit the carpeted floor. She looked toward the ground to see what she had tripped over, and, not to her surprise, she saw her father lying in the same position in which her mother had been curled.

          She had not had much time to think. She stood up so quickly that the room started to spin. She raced past the bed, trying not to look at her parents, as tears streamed down her ashen face.

          She slowed her pace as she nearly ran into a wall. She jogged down the hall and into the kitchen, grabbed the phone and started dialing 911. There was no dial tone.

          She slammed the phone back on the receiver, thinking there would be a dial tone this time. It was still dead. She dropped the phone.

          She had just noticed a trail of blood that led from her parent’s bedroom all the way through the kitchen and right underneath the fridge. That was something she had not expected to see, even in the situation she was in at the moment.

          She was a fourteen-year-old girl stranded in the middle of the country with two dead parents and no transportation. She sat there and thought. She knew she was smart, but for some reason, she could not think of a way to take herself to safety because, for all she knew, whoever had killed her parents could still be around. She wondered why whomever it was had not come into her room and killed her the same way he had killed her parents. Her room was closer to the only entrance in the house. The thought that they had completely passed over her room made her wonder.

                   She walked out of the kitchen and headed for the backdoor of her country house. Her only neighbor lived five miles away. That was not as far as it could have been, but she did not look forward to that long walk.

          Mcayla had not seen her boyfriend, Josh, in over six months. He had moved to a different town and was going to come to visit her today. He was supposed to be there around four-thirty, depending on the traffic.

          She looked at her watch checking the time. It was 9:30. It would take her about forty-five minutes to make it to the neighbors. Hopefully, someone was home at her best friend, Leon’s, house.

           She slowly walked out of her driveway, wondering where her dog was. There was no sound at all. Usually, the normal sounds of the country were noisy and uncaring for anyone else, but today there were no sounds, none at all.

          Mcayla’s tear-stained face strained to see the closest house. The harsh, cold wind beat against her face, stinging as she went along.

          For October, the weather was extremely cold. The gray, cumulous clouds were darkening the sky. The sun was not peaking through the clouds anywhere. Mcayla grew increasingly cold as she walked along the unpaved, unmaintained country road.

          Mcayla thought of possible explanations to her parent’s inexplicable deaths. She walked past an old, abandoned house. A nice old man had lived there just a few years ago, but after he could not afford to live there anymore, his family put him into an old folks’ home.

          Mcayla strayed off the road and walked down his drive-way. She scanned the area for the sight of anything that might look out of place or unfamiliar. Nothing was out of place, but there was unease in the air, in the feel of the place. She walked up to the front door and pulled open the worn, old screen door and stepped inside. She was going to warm up a little before beginning to walk the rest of the three miles to Leon’s house.

          She walked in the front door and did her normal routine, walking down the steps into the basement-style house. Everything had been cleared out of the house except for an old couch and a gas heater.

          Mcayla looked around the house, searching for matches. She knew there was a box somewhere. She hurried back into the room and quickly lit the heater. It was amazing. The warmth washed over her immediately. She soon felt tired. Her eyelids started growing heavy, and she was almost immediately sleeping.

 She was overtaken by horrific images that flashed before her, flashes of her mother and father walking around the kitchen with blood dripping off them. Then the room filled with blood and she was swimming in it. It was disgusting. Her haunting dreams continued for almost an hour.

          A heart-stopping, ice-cold breeze awakened her. She quickly stood up and walked up the stairs and closed the door that had somehow opened. When she turned the doorknob to shut the door, her hand started burning. She quickly slammed the door and looked at her hand. Her hand was red and swollen and there was a strange design on her hand. She looked from her hand to the doorknob to see what was on it. Green-orange goo dripped off the knob. Something was intricately drawn on the doorknob. It was a cross with a rose thorn through the middle. She looked back at her hand. Miraculously, the redness and swelling had gone down. Her hand had a cross with a thorn embedded on her skin.

          Mcayla opened up the door without touching the doorknob. Snow was steadily falling. Wisps of wind picked up, blowing the snow into her face. She walked along the dirt path back to the road to continue her agonizing walk to Leon’s.

          Her feet sank into the deepening snow. The loud, crunching noise of her walking echoed throughout the area. There was no one around. She had about two more miles to go until she would reach Leon’s house. She was becoming increasingly worried that she would have frostbite, or maybe she would become so cold that she would not be able to continue her walk.

          Mcayla checked the time. It was ten-thirty. She had slept longer than she thought she had. If she kept this pace all the way to Leon’s house, she would be there in another hour.

          The snow, falling more quickly now, started piling up on her shoulders. The wind had stopped blowing for the moment. She saw a burrow in the snow bank. Deciding that would be the best place to wait until the snowfall began to thin out, she crawled into the small crevice.

                                                                                                                                                                             ***                                                                                                                                                                                           Tish Springston lived almost ten miles away from Mcayla. She lived in a spacious two-story house with her mother, father, and two little brothers. They owned about three acres of property covered in mostly trees.

          Her family had not had the best reputation. They were known for speaking their minds, always. Even if Tish were at school, she would tell people what she thought, teachers, students, everyone. She learned speaking her mind from her mother, who no matter what. would tell anyone what she was thinking whenever she was thinking it.

          Tish woke up at six o’clock as usual. She threw her legs off the side of the bed and yawned. Her eyes scanned her messy room. Things were everywhere. Clothes were piled on the floor. She stood up and walked over to a wooden chair where she had set her clean clothes, picked them up, and walked out into the kitchen. Her mother was making coffee while her littlest brother ran around with a toy truck.

          Tish grew bored of watching her brother play, so she decided to go into the bathroom to put on her clothes. When she came out, the house was silent. She walked into the kitchen; no one was there, and no one was in the living room or upstairs, either. She looked outside to see if the cars were there; they were. Opening the front door, she felt a horrible chill. It was snowing outside, and not a light snow either. There were snowdrifts almost as big as the house. It must have been snowing for awhile.

          Tish walked back into the house, thinking that one of the neighbors might have taken her mom to town or something, but when she walked back into the house, she noticed everything was out of place. The TV was left on. Coffee cups were left on the tables, and why had not they told her they were leaving? They knew she was in the bathroom, but they didn’t knock just to say they were leaving.  Knowing the area like she did, if they were to have left the house in that big a storm, they had to have been in a four-wheel drive.

***

Mcayla sat there wondering how long it would take for the snow to die down. The wind had slowed since she had gone into the cave, like snow drifting on the side of the road. It had never snowed that much in who knows how long. She noticed the sun was starting to peek out a little through the clouds. That was the best time she figured to begin to walk again.

          A normally not-so-long walk had turned into an all-day thing. By the time she was out of her encavement, it was four o'clock. In about forty minutes, her boyfriend, Josh, would be coming down the road. Maybe he would be earlier than they had planned and they could retrieve help. Maybe what she had seen at her house had only been a freakish nightmare. The images of her parents were still embedded in her memory. It was the worst thing possible one of the worst moments of her life, and it would not go away.         

          She stepped out of the little cave and walked out onto the snow-covered road. Nothing could be seen. She could only see for a few feet, and after that, the glare of the sun hit her eyes causing them to water and her to squint. The clouds had completely disappeared from the sky and the sun was shining brightly.

          Her shoes were not the best to be out in weather like this. Her toes must have been frostbitten by then. She jumped in the air a few times to start the blood moving, hoping this might warm up her body. Maybe running would be a good idea. She jumped one last jump and began running down the road. The crunch her shoes made was almost unbearable. It was the only sound for miles, and she was not really in the mood to hear anything at the moment.

          She kept her eyes ahead and her back straight. This running thing really did help her out. The tingling in her hands had almost stopped. As she ran up the little uphill road, she could see the tip of the trees that enclosed Leon's house. From what she could tell, no one had left the house since the storm had started. A good thing for her. If no one was home, she was out of luck, but maybe their phones were working. She could call someone for help. The thought never crossed her mind that something might also be wrong at their house.

          She came up to the turn and slowed to a walk. She edged to the right side of the road, making sure that any one who might happen to be driving and could not see her because of the glare off the snow. She heard dogs barking, as she moved in closer to the house. She felt like an agent in a James Bond movie. She could hear the music echoing in her head, as she walked closer to the trees that surrounded the house.

          A million thoughts at once ran through her head. What if something were wrong here? Should she just run up to the house, or should she secretively walk in from behind and check the windows to make sure that everything was all right first? The first answer that came to her head was, “Just go to the house.”

          Walking out from behind the coverage of the trees, she noticed that all the cars were parked in their normal places. Smoke was coming out of the chimney, all good signs that everything was ok. Walking as fast as possible without causing too much attention to herself, she walked up to the door. One knock and she opened the door.

          Leon was sitting on the floor staring at the TV, his mother was stoking the fire and his father was in the kitchen. His sister was lying on the floor reading a book. Where the other brother and sister were ... no one knew. All of them turned to look at her, as she walked into the room and closed the front door. They all looked like they were stunned and wondering what happened. Until this very moment, Mcayla had not spoken to anyone since the night before. Words were hard for her to find, but she did. It was hard work trying to tell them what had happened.

          She told them everything, from the moment she had awakened until that exact moment. At the end of it, she waited for their replies. The first person to say anything

was Leon.

          “We knew that already Mcayla. This has been planned since day one, and you know it."

          “What do you mean? How could you have already known?"

          Somewhere in the kitchen, Leon's dad said,” It’s ok. We know everything. We know who you are.  We know where you come from.  We know everything about you.

It is time for you to give up this silly nonsense and come home. It's all right. You have been gone long enough."

          Before anything that had been said had had time to register, Mcayla was out the door. She ran across the field until she knew she was completely hidden by the few trees that remained on the far side of the farm. Now that she was looking around, everything was out of place. Chickens were all gone. Dogs were locked up in the barn--in the barn!

          A light bulb seemed to have gone off in her head, as if for some reason the barn seemed the perfect place to answer her questions. Usually a quiet unused barn, it now stood with an eerie, cold fullness of life. The windows shown gray against the snow that surrounded the ground and roof. The barn was three stories, counting the loft in the attic. She had only been up there a few times with Leon when she was younger. Ever since then, she was told to stay away. She never really questioned why. Not like her, not to question something.

          An odd gnawing at the back off her throat told her that whatever was in that barn was there for a reason. If only she could remember what had been up there when she was little. It was along time ago. Memories fade. As she started thinking about it, though, she could not remember anything before the age of six. She had been told stories about herself, but she never had any actual memories. Oh, well, most little kids don't remember their childhoods anyway.

          The barn was looking more and more inviting. She crept along the side of the trees, making sure not to be seen. They had to be out of the house looking for her by now. As she crept along the side of the trees she thought, “Where are the dogs? I heard them earlier.”

          Not a moment afterward, the dogs were let out of a small bunk house to the left of the house. That must explain where the brother was, but where was the sister?

          Halfway to the barn, she heard a rustle in the trees. Having no idea what it was, she began sprinting toward the barn. She made it, luckily without being seen. So far it seemed to her that luck had everything to do with her being alive, or safe from whatever was going on in her life.

          She climbed through a hole in the back of the barn where no one could see her. It was pitch black on the first floor of the barn. Feeling her way to the old wooden wall, she found her way to the stairs. She climbed them and noticed as she was coming closer to the second floor, the darkness started going away and grayness appeared. She reached the second floor and found Chantal crouched in a blanket near an old, warn flashlight with a gray substance splattered all over it.

          That explained why she was drawn to come into the barn. Maybe it was safe here. Maybe for some reason, they would not check the barn because it was so close to where they were. One thing was sure. She did not think that those people out there looking for her were the people she knew. They were something else ... something ... different.

***

          Tish walked back into the house, still thinking something would have had to have been terribly wrong for everyone in her family to just leave her like that. Her mom knew that she was supposed to go over to Mcayla’s house that day because Josh was coming up to visit. It was not very often that the whole gang was back together again. Leon, Mcayla, Tish, Chantal, and Josh, that was their small group.  It was not much, but they were the people whom she most looked forward to seeing. Ever since Josh had left, things had been so different between them all. Leon started hanging out with the wrong crowd, and Mcayla kept mostly to herself. Chantal was never alone, always with a large group of unfamiliar faces, and Tish?  Tish kept things the way they used to be, with one minor exception:  she had no one to talk to. Thus, when Mcayla called her to say that everyone was coming over to her house on Saturday, she jumped at the idea. Maybe after that, things would be the same. Instead of being five different people who could not share anything with anyone, perhaps they would be back to the way it used to be--being able to tell each other everything.

          Tish walked through the living room looking at all the misplaced objects lying everywhere. Besides the fact that it looked like it had been vacated in a hurry, the house seemed to be completely different. It was actually all the same, but something felt different. No one ever left Tish home unless they asked her. She had issues with being alone. For some reason, she did not feel like she was alone. She felt like she was being watched from every corner of the house. The place where she especially felt like people were watching her was near the stairs that led up to her parent’s bedroom. She was never allowed up there unless her parents were around. When they were not home, they would lock the doors so no one could go up there.

          She walked past the door a few times … looking at it each time. On the last pass by it, she noticed a crack. The door was open! Her mother never left the doors open. She reached for the door knob and began to turn it. She quickly pulled away. Her hand was throbbing. The pain was unbearable. She looked at her hand. There was a design on it that she could not quite make out. The door was covered in orange-green goo. She reached around and grabbed the corner of the door and pulled it open. Her hands were red and aching. There was no swelling, though.

          Her feet seemed to lead her up the stairs and into her mother’s and father’s room. It was empty. Everything was in its usual place. Too bad no one was in there. She did a quick look around the room and decided nothing was there. She walked through all the rooms upstairs. Nothing was in the first two, but in the third one, there was and awful stench. A trail of blood led from the doorway into where the old closet had been (earlier that year, they had closed off the door with plywood). Fear was overtaking her. She quickly ran … no, not ran, sprinted out of the house.  The cold snow hit her legs as she trampled out onto the road.  No cars had been on the road since the snow had started to fall.

          The neighbors’ lights were on and all their houses looked warm and welcoming, but for some reason, none of the houses seemed to look like they wanted her there. She did not want to go inside either. She was on the verge of a panic attack, and she did not think that going into a house with warmth, and bright shiny faces, was going to make her feel any better. The best place for her to go was the police station. It was only a few blocks away from where she was at the moment. She figured she could make it to them faster then they could come to her.

          She crunched along in the snow, counting the houses as she went along. She grew bored with that and tried to memorize the “blue, tan, white, blue, and tan, white.” As she was repeating this over and over in her head, she noticed a shadow in a place where there should not be a shadow. There were no clouds anymore, and there was nothing standing tall enough to make that large a shadow. Maybe it was her imagination, or maybe things just kept becoming stranger.

          Her eyes strayed away from the unusual shadow toward the other side of the road. None of the lights in the houses on the left side of the road were on. Every house seemed to be deserted. She knew something had to be wrong. Where was everyone, and why did only one side of the road have its lights off?

          Quickly remembering that she had to go to the police station, she began to walk. She kept to the middle of the road, trying to avoid the stares from the empty houses. The snow made a crunching noise under her feet. Each step made an echoing noise, since no one was outside, or from what she could tell, anywhere in the town.

***

          Mcayla sat next to Chantal for almost an hour without moving. Chantal had not even stirred, except for her rhythmic breathing. The sun was hidden behind a cloud. She checked her watch. It was two-thirty. In another hour and a half, Josh would be on his way to her house. Maybe she would be able to catch him as he sped down the road. He always went almost thirty miles over the speed limit.

          Chantal began tossing. Mcayla could see her eyes moving. Her eyelids flicked open and the expression on her face was horror. Chantal scanned the room quickly. Her eyes bounced wildly around the room, scanning every crevice. Her red swollen eyes finally met Mcayla’s unwavering gaze.

          A blinding flash exploded into the room, causing their eyes to sting. They immediately searched around the room for something that could have caused such a bright light. Not a thing in the room looked like it could cause something so bright. The door leading to the highest part of the barn was locked, as usual. The only explanation Mcayla could come up with was that something had flashed underneath the door frame.

          Quickly making a glance toward Chantal, Mcayla stood up and walked toward the door. Her hand began to burn the closer she came to the door. It hurt so much that she had to stop advancing toward it.  She quickly lifted her hand into her range of vision and saw that it was red and inflamed. The mark that she had on her hand was raised. It was black. Everything else on her hand was red, except for the small tattoo-like mark of a rose thorn on a cross. It did not matter to her anymore that her hand was in extreme pain. She walked on. The closer she was to the door, the hotter it became. Sweat was dripping off her face when she was within two feet of the door.

          She reached the door and another flash reached her eyes. This one was brighter than the last one. It did not cause her to close her eyes, but soon after it was over, she was seeing colored spots. It prolonged her making it to the door. She crept the last few steps to the door and reached out to grab the knob, when Chantal came running at her and tackled her away from the door.

          Mcayla hit the ground hard. Her head came down and smacked next to the old barn wall; her arms smashed against an old pile of lumber. She raised her head and noticed blood dripping down the left side of her face. She followed the droplet with her eyes as it slid down her face, became a bubble at the edge of her cheek, and, almost in slow motion, fell and splattered on the ground.

***

          Tish had never felt so alone. Not only was there no one around, but she felt as if no one else in the world existed. The crisp, cold wind blew against her red cheeks. She was already on Main Street--not much farther to the station. She glanced up at the bank sign. It was only 24 degrees outside. She had a quick memory of her science teacher telling her that ice melts and freezes at the same temperature, not something she usually thought about, but anything was good when she had nobody to talk to. People’s faces flashed before her eyes, as she went on a memory tour of her high school. She passed familiar faces along the way. For some reason, in her daydream, she could not focus on Leon or his sister, Donna. They were fuzzy, like watching ant races on TV: you could see their shape, but their faces were distorted.  Other people’s faces were fuzzy, too. Teachers and some other students were fuzzy.

          Crunch Crunch Crunch.  Tish quickly turned her head and was smacked with something. She was out cold, but she was going somewhere.

***

          Mcayla stood up almost as quickly as she had fallen. Blood was still falling off her face, but that did not matter to her. Nothing mattered. Her parents were dead. Her best friend was, well, she did not know what her best friend was. She just hoped that whatever was behind that door had answers to questions. She needed those answers, and if Chantal were going to try to stop her, she was going to regret it.

***

          Tish had still not gained consciousness. Her limp body was dragged across snow, then gravel. She lost all sense of life after that. The image of her high school was again in her head. She was walking into the bathroom, and looking into the mirror. Her face was slightly fuzzy. It was not as the others were, but it seemed to be moving closer. Whatever she had to do, she would fight to gain consciousness. Whatever the fuzziness was, she did not want to be it. Her mind was running on its own now. It was going through her memory banks. Actually, it did not feel right in a way. It felt like it was looking for something specific, something it knew was there, but simply could not find it.

          Millions of images were running through her mind. She began to look for something, too. Maybe she could find the source of what was making her look. That’s when she found it:  a light. Her eyes shot open. She was awake. Not good for her.

***

          Mcayla stood up and paced around the room. She shot an awkward glance at Chantal; then, she continued to walk around the room. Her eyes would dart toward the door.  Her eyes were only tiny slits. They were like cat eyes. She was alert, and waiting for the moment she could again try to make it to the door. Chantal had retreated back to where she had been lying.  Tears were streaming down Chantal’s flushed face. Her eyes were glossy and red. Each time she blinked, she looked as if it were hard for her to open her eyes.

          Mcayla stood up and walked over to Chantal. She sat on the small blanket on which Chantal had been sleeping. Mcayla stared into Chantal’s eyes. For some reason, she was almost entranced by their green/red swollenness. The room started spinning. It was like she was in a vortex, a never-ending vortex.

          Everything kept spinning. It would not stop. Everything was a whirl of colors and lights.  Mcayla was becoming sick fast.  Her head was rushing. She was nauseous. Then the room slowly started coming to a stop. Slower and slower, the colors whizzed around.

          The last thing she could clearly make out was Chantal. Then, of course, it had to have been Chantal who had caused the spinning. It was the only logical answer Mcayla could come up with. When the room had finally stopped spinning, she was in an entirely different part of the barn. She had been sitting down when the spinning had started, so why was she now on the other side of the barn? Chantal was sleeping again. It looked as though Chantal had gone back into the same position in which she had been when Mcayla had entered the barn. Had the spinning been Mcayla waking from a dream, or had it really happened? There was only one way to find out, but she was going to try a different approach.

          Mcayla walked along the side of the barn, staying in the shadow. She did not want to wake Chantal while she was on her death-defying mission. Mcayla kept near the side of the wall. She must not wake Chantal. She moved over to the big, double-doors that led to nothing except a ten-foot drop off the side of the barn. Slowly she opened the door enough to peek out. Nothing was in sight. She opened the door and flung her leg out onto a ledge. It would be a hard climb, but she was going to make it to the next floor some way. This was the only other way besides the door. She reached up to a loose board and pulled herself up to another ledge to put her feet on. She looked down. It was not that far, but she was terribly scared of heights. She reached up and grabbed the ledge of the window that led into the attic. She moved her legs up, searching for a ledge on which to rest her feet.  At first, she could not find a ledge and frantically searched for something on which to rest her feet. Her hands were starting to slip. The old wood had splinters ripping into her hands. As she started slipping, she found a ledge.  Of course, she thought movie predictability.  In this kind of situation, she still had her sense of humor. One last pull and she was on the window ledge, jumping down into the attic.

          It was pitch black in there. It was not what she had expected. She was waiting for a childhood memory to flash before her eyes. She knew she had been in this exact room before, but she couldn’t remember what had happened in there. She went to the nearest wall and put her hand against the wood. She moved her hand all over the wall, looking for a switch. She found it and quickly flicked it into life. Then it went out. She tried it again a second later. It turned on.

          She looked around the room almost amazed. There were gadgets everywhere. Outside the door, she heard a scuffle, then the sound of a loud crack. The shiny objects on the wall shook. Then she remembered. Faces flashed before her eyes, things. Nothing was right. She saw her mother and father. She saw Leon. Everything was right. They were walking across the yard and into the barn. They walked up all the steps and came into the attic in the barn. Everyone stood watching. They picked her up and sat her in a chair. Someone grabbed her arm and held it straight out.

          That’s when she felt a searing pain in her left arm. It was unbearable. Her memory continued flashing before her eyes. A large plastic-looking thing was pressed against her skin. It was as if her skin was lifted up, because the plastic thing seemed to disappear underneath it.

          Just as fast as her memory was there, it was gone. A chair sat in the middle of the room. Blood was splattered all over it. This had to have been the chair she was set in. She lifted her arm to look at it. She had never noticed before, but there was a large scar in the middle of her arm. She took her thumb and finger and ran them across the surface. It was hard, too hard for skin.

          Then, the sound of a door opening reached her ears, but not in time. She was being dragged down the stairs and out of the barn. She passed Chantal. Chantal was lying in the corner. Someone was looking over her. All of a sudden, she could not see Chantal’s face anymore. It was blurred. It was like a dream. It was all like a dream.

***

          This was not supposed to happen to people like Tish. She was supposed to live a very sheltered life. No strange and unsolved phenomena. She was not supposed to be tied to a tree in the middle of the forest surrounded by the nastiest creatures she had ever seen. They were all tied to surrounding trees. Some had clothes on. Some had familiar clothes on, actually. It was odd to see monsters in clothes. She never thought she would die being eaten by horrible creatures from Hell, but, hey, as long as it were not painful. She could not believe what she was thinking. She quickly brushed those thoughts out of her mind, and pushed her mind to concentrate on the ropes binding her to the tree. The ropes were not very good; they looked like they were over ten years old. She started pulling on lose strands of string. The rope wasn’t very thick. At this rate, she would be out in no time, but did she want out? Would she be safe out there with those horrible creatures?

          Each one looked a little different, but each was fairly much the same. They were hairless except for the extreme number of strands that hung over their eyes and onto their faces. Some were taller than others, with feet that looked almost one-foot long, and their nails were as if they had never been cut. They were disgusting. Spit was flying everywhere. Each time they opened their mouths, a horrific grunting or screeching noise came out, followed by lots of spit.

          Only a few strands of rope remained. If she hurried, it would only take about five minutes to escape. Then, she had to avoid the things that were tied to most of the trees. It would not be easy making it out of there, but she had to try. “Might as well go out with a fight,”     she thought.

          There was one more string left on the rope. It snapped. She was free. She quickly stood up and surveyed the area. The monster-like, Hell creatures seemed to be sleeping. At least, it looked like they were. She carefully began to walk through the narrow path of trees. With each step, she had to avoid large, disgusting monstrosities.     

          Ever so often, one of the creatures would move and she would have to do a quick maneuver to keep from stepping on one. Each monster was tethered to a tree with a very thick chain. Most of them were sleeping, but some were awake.

          Each step she took, she had to avoid large gruesome creatures. None of them paid much attention to her and if they did, they lazily concentrated on her. Their eyes would follow her footsteps and close; then, they would open and follow her again. If the situation had been different, she probably would have thought this was funny, but since she did not know whether or not she were in a life-or-death situation, she could not stop to notice all the details around her. The surreal images became interesting, and for the moment, she did not feel as if she were wending her way through a maze of monsters.

***

                   After Mcayla was carried out of the barn, she was thrown into the back of an old, white pick-up. The light from the sun reflected off the snow, giving her a great view of who had grabbed her. It was her best friend, Leon, or maybe it was not Leon. Leon had been her best friend forever, but was this the person she knew or was this his true self? It did not matter. She had to escape from them. That is all she knew. The moment opportunity knocked, she would be gone. How, was yet unknown to her.

          In the front of the truck, she could hear them trying to start it. It would turn over, but would not start. After a few silent minutes, they turned the key again and the truck roared into life. The truck was put into gear and they were on their way. The road they took, by the feel of it, did not seem to be the one they would take on a normal day. It wasn’t bumpy. It was like it were paved, but the closest paved road was a few miles away. It was strange. She finally sat up and looked out the window. It was cold out, but not as cold as if she were outside. Telephone poles whizzed by in a blur. She looked at the road. It was paved. That would mean that they would have had to have gone at least five miles to the nearest paved road, but how would they have made it there without touching one stitch of bumpy unpaved gravel road?

          Too many strange things were going on today.  Things like this weren’t supposed to happen to her. She checked the tailgate, hoping she could open it. Her efforts were futile. The truck hit a large bump and she was sent flying into the rear window, causing her nose to bleed severely. She quickly placed her sleeve over her nose to try to stop the bleeding. The truck was still bouncing madly along the stretch of what looked like a field. They kept hitting large mounds of dirt, probably dug out by a prairie dog.

          It was approaching dusk when the truck finally came to a complete, but vigorous, stop. It looked like it was past five, which meant that Josh had probably already gone to her house and found out what was going on. Hopefully, he would come down this road so that she might have the slightest chance to escape. The sun had almost set. No one had left the truck since they had stopped. It felt like hours before they stepped out of the truck, but it had really only been three minutes. The whole time, she had been scanning the area for any other sign of life, something that did not look like it contained the very essence of evil in its eyes.

           Mcayla noticed, as the drivers approached the back of the truck, that their eyes looked like they were filled with pain. Each set of eyes was different. Leon’s eyes, which were normally blue, were now a piercing green color with specks of red. The way he scrunched them up made him look like he was in pain. She felt a kind of sympathy for him, even though he had taken her hostage, and had most likely killed the people she loved the most.

***

          Tish grabbed a tree and tightly wrapped her arms around it. She was at the very end of the trees. There were no more horrible creatures surrounding her. Instead, there was a monotonous droning sound.  She had come out of the woods near the main road. She was almost at Mcayla’s house. More snow had fallen out in the country than in town. The sun was almost set, and the cold air hit her cheeks and nose with a sharp force.          

          About five miles away, she could see a light. It was not a car, but it might have been a house. She had nowhere else to go, so she started out toward the light. She walked inside of the tire tracks that were deeply pressed into the snow. It was not even close to five miles away. It was maybe only a mile away. She arrived sooner then she had planned. She had not even thought about what she was going to do. She quickly decided that walking out into the open was not a great plan, so she idly walked along the edge of the property.

          She noticed two trucks in the almost non-existent, snow-covered drive way. There were people sitting in the cab of the white one. No one was in the brown one. From the looks of it, someone was in the bed of the truck, and whomever it was, the person did not look like he/she wanted to be there at all. After a few minutes of watching, the three people in the truck stepped out and walked to the back. They opened the hatch and attempted to coax the person out of his/her own free-will. They did not move. The smallest of the three people who had climbed out of the truck, reached in and grabbed the person. Immediately after the girl had emerged from the truck, Tish knew it was Mcayla. No one else had her unique look

          Tish knew that Mcayla was being held against her will. She also knew that whoever was holding her, had to be behind the disappearance of most of the town, including her parents. She heard the distant roar of a truck and saw headlights. She would head for that truck and hope it was someone she knew. They would for sure be able to help her find a way to help Mcayla.

          At first she started at a jog; then she started to sprint as fast as she could. The truck drew closer, and closer. She was almost there. She flailed her arms all over the place, hoping the truck would stop. It did, and to Tish’s amazement, the person driving the truck was … Josh.

          Tish just stood staring at Josh. She was transfixed. She had not expected to see him at all. As a matter of fact, she had completely forgotten that he was coming out to see Mcayla today. After a few moments of staring at each other, the events of the day rushed through Tish’s mind. Everything was overwhelming. She opened the truck door, jumped in and said, “Drive.”

          They drove about three miles away from where she had been picked up. Neither one of them had said anything. Josh had a terrible look on his face. It was not the normal look of happiness that now covered the whole of his face. His brow was wrinkled and his eyes were scrunched up. He parked off the side of the road in a small enclosure of trees, just off the main road. Tish began to tell her side of the story, when Josh interrupted her.

          “I think Mcayla is dead. Her parents are. I found them in their bedroom. There was no sign of Mcayla anywhere. The area was deserted. I’m worried; if she isn’t dead, then where is she?!”

          “Don’t worry.  I think Mcayla is alive. I think she is being held in that barn where you picked me up. I flagged you down so that we could find a way to rescue her. Are you sure her parents are d-ddead?”

          “I’m one hundred percent sure. People do not look like they did and live to tell about it. Anyway, how did you get out here?”

          Tish started telling Josh what had happened to her. She even tried to explain how the people’s faces had looked when she was daydreaming. It only took her about five minutes to finish her story. She had told it in a rush. Immediately after she told her story, they made a plan to take Mcayla out of where she was being held. The plan was simple.

***

          Mcayla was taken out of the truck and put in the large barn. No one was around. It had been almost twenty minutes since Leon had put her into the barn. She had heard muffled voices talking outside, but other than that, there was no sound. There were two lights hanging in the barn. It was enough light to look around. Mcayla was sitting on the ground drawing pictures in the dirt floor, when she heard shouting and then a large crash.

          Several male voices reached her ears. One scream shattered the shouting and two people came running in the door, followed by her captors. There was a gunshot and the two dim lights went out. She heard a grunt, quickly followed by someone screaming ... no ... it couldn’t be.  Had someone screamed, “No, Josh! …”?


HONORABLE MENTION – SHORT STORY

 

Blessings in Disguise

By S. Rott

Anamoose High School

Anamoose, North Dakota

Teacher: Candy Lemer – Grade 10

 

Sitting here in my rocking chair, I let myself drift back into my past.  I think about the choices I made and the decisions I was faced with.  As I close my eyes, I float back in time and think about what took place some fifteen years ago.

When we first heard folks talking about going West, we thought they were crazy.  Why would they want to risk their lives traveling unknown trails full of Indians and wild animals?  I couldn’t imagine leaving behind all of your family and friends to discover a new life.  It just didn’t make sense, or so I thought.

          Charles and I had a decent life.  He made his living as a blacksmith.  Day after day, he worked hard to provide food for our table.  We were married in late October, over three years ago.  We hadn’t been blessed with children yet, but we both longed for a child of our own.

          We had a little home outside of town.  I stayed home during the day and kept up the house and our farm.  I raised a few vegetables for the winter and took care of the animals.  It was my job to feed the chickens and milk Bessie, our cow, each morning.  Charles usually tended to our horse.

          We were eating supper by the fire on a cool, March evening when Charles told me the news.  He wanted to go West and start a new life.  I was very shocked and surprised.  Why on earth would we want to risk so much and leave the life we had here in Independence?  There were so many unanswered questions.

          Although I was leery, I let Charles explain to me what he had planned.  The wagon train was leaving on April 10 to head west.  There would be about 15 wagons going in our train.  We would have to purchase our own wagon, and the only belongings we could bring were those that would fit inside.  We needed to make our decision by the next morning.

          I was so upset that I couldn’t speak.  Charles had his mind made up, and it didn’t look like I was going to have any say in the matter.  I couldn’t imagine what would make him change his mind about going West. I told him goodnight and then went to bed.  As I lay in my bed, I thought about what events might take place within the next month.  Many families were leaving; we wouldn’t be the first.  As I was lying there, listening to Charles put away our dishes, I realized that things were changing.    Our little town of Independence, Missouri, was gradually getting smaller and there were people leaving constantly to start new lives for themselves.  Even though I wasn’t happy that Charles had already made his decision, I decided that he knew what was best for us.  I had to make a choice:  to pout and wish it wasn’t happening, or have fun and make our journey an adventure.  I decided to make the most of the opportunity, even if I was scared out of my mind.

          The next morning, I talked to Charles about the decision I had made.  I told him about my fears, but I also said that I was willing to take some risks too.  He was so excited that he picked me up in the air and twirled me around and around.

          A week later, I tried to decide what to take along and what to leave behind.  Making these choices were some of the hardest decisions I have ever had to make.  I decided to bring my chest of drawers, my china tea set, and my rocking chair.  I began to pack up the things we wouldn’t be taking along.  My sister and her husband agreed to take most of it.

          Charles brought home a wagon the next day.  We would take the cow, but we were going to have to sell the horse and chickens.  We would also have to purchase some oxen.  We traveled into town together to choose the ones we wanted.  Charles picked out two big-boned, red oxen.  We named them Jim and Jack.  We bought five other oxen, but these two were our favorites.  We also picked up some extra supplies while we were there in case of a break down or shortage of something.

          Finally the day came.  I woke up that fresh April morning, and it really hit me.  I would never sleep in our little bedroom or make a meal in our kitchen again.  It was time to say goodbye.  We traveled into town and were greeted by our family and friends.  It was a sad farewell.  I didn’t know if I would ever see any of them again.

          The wagon master gave the final call; it was time to go.  We crawled up into the wagon, and Charles gave Jim and Jack the cue.  As we drove away, I looked back once more at our little town of Independence, knowing I would probably never see it again.

          We traveled until about five o’clock that evening.  Our wagons formed a big circle, and we began to make supper and feed our animals.  I started a fire while Charles tended to the oxen and the cow.  We ate and settled down for the night.  As we lay in the back of our wagon, I listened to his even breathing and the sounds of the night and thought about what had happened on our journey so far.  Earlier that day, I met Sarah, a woman not much older than I was.  She was headed to Oregon with her husband, John, too. He was a doctor, and she was a teacher.  I was so excited to meet someone my age, and we would be living near each other when we settled in the Willamette Valley.  It was nice to have someone to talk to and share my fears and dreams with.  A coyote howled in the distance.  I moved closer to Charles and closed my eyes.  I drifted to sleep, dreaming about our new life in the Willamette Valley.

          We kept traveling, day after day, on the dusty trail.  Each day we got up at sunrise to eat breakfast and prepare for the day ahead of us.  We would usually stop around noon to eat dinner and rest the animals for an hour or so.  We then would continue traveling until four or five o’clock and make camp.  In the evenings we typically tended to repairs, took care of the animals, or hunted.  Sometimes we would gather around the fire and sing folk songs.  It was always neat to meet new people and talk about what we were going to do when we settled down in Oregon. 

          It was during one of these times when Sarah told me the news that she was pregnant.  She had just told John the news the day before. I was so excited for her and John, but I couldn’t help wishing that I were in her shoes.  I longed to have a child of my own, and I knew Charles did too. 

          The next day, I walked with Sarah behind our wagons.  We talked about what things would be like when we reached the valley.  We’d been told that it was full of fertile soil and tall trees.   We imagined what our homes would look like and where we would put our gardens.  We also talked of our children growing up together.

          It was about that time when Charles called me up to the wagon.  A river was up ahead and we were going to have to caulk the wagons and float across.  He slowed down for me to get in as Sarah walked over to find John. 

          We each took turns floating across the river.  It was about six feet deep, and it had a fairly strong current.  After we got our wagon across safely, we stopped to let the animals graze and help others who were still coming over.   Charles walked over to help the other men with the extra oxen while I went to find Sarah.  As I was walking, I heard a shout.  I turned around and saw that a wagon had tipped over while trying to cross.  I watched in fear as a small child struggled to find something to grab onto.  Her mother had already made it to shore, with the help of some others.  She screamed and cried frantically as she helplessly watched her daughter. 

          The men tried to swim out and save the child, but it was too late.  She was swept off a rock and quickly carried away by the currents.   We all agreed to camp there for the night, even if it was early in the day.  Many people walked along the river, looking for signs of survival, but none were found. 

          The next morning, after a having a short service in memory of young Suzie Kendall, we began traveling again.  It was very difficult, but I was glad to be leaving that forsaken river.  How hard it must have been for her family, knowing that they would no longer see her or her grave marker again. 

          That evening Charles and I went over to the Kendall’s wagon.  Through talking to the family, we learned that Suzie was not their only child.  Jack and Janet Kendall had three other children under six; the youngest, Rose, was only six months old. After visiting with Janet, I learned that she had her hands full.  I promised I would help her out in whatever way I could.

          We kept traveling the dusty trails each day.  My feet and back were sore from walking; I had never felt so exhausted before.  I helped Janet out each day by taking care of the children while she took care of little Rose.  Taking care of her children made the ache in my heart grow bigger each day.  When would I have my own little boy or girl to hold in my arms?  I hoped it would be very soon.  I had a suspicion that I may have been pregnant.  I didn’t want to tell Charles the news, for I feared of being wrong.   There would be nothing more devastating than telling him that my suspicions were false.

          Nothing new happened in the next weeks to follow; however, we did find some fruit and vegetables along the trail and stopped to pick them.  It was nice to have a little bit of variety in our meal.  Those few weeks would have been very dull, if I wouldn’t have found out some exciting news.  My suspicions had been correct.  I was going to have a baby!!  When I told Charles the news, he didn’t believe me.  When I finally convinced him that I wasn’t teasing, he was thrilled.  I don’t know if I’d ever seen him so happy.

          The excitement began to wear off as time went on though.  Each night, I collapsed, exhausted into the back of our wagon.  When would this awful journey be over?  Each day we looked at nothing more than bare, desolate plains.  Was this new life really worth all the hard work?  It seemed as though we had been traveling for years.   My shoes were beginning to wear out and the blisters were almost unbearable.   The only two things that kept my hopes up was the thought of the new life inside of me, and the love I felt for Charles.

I usually got a decent night’s sleep until the rains began.  We soon found out that there was a hole on the cover of the wagon.  It rained steadily for two and half days. When it finally quit, I surveyed the soaking mess inside.  Everything was wet.  I would have to try to air dry everything out.   On top of that, it would be hard on the oxen to travel on the muddy trails.  I didn’t think things could get any worse . . . until I woke up the next morning.

          I rolled over in our bed, and realized that the sun was peeking through a crack.  How could we have overslept?  I touched Charles’ arm to wake him up, and it felt cold and clammy.  Something was wrong.  As I tried to arouse him, he barely stirred.  I ran outside to get help from John.  I was sure that he would know what to do.

          John and I ran back to the wagon.  When we got there we saw that Charles was holding his legs.  He was obviously in a lot of pain; he said that he had terrible cramps. John felt for a pulse while I tried to massage his cramps.  I glanced up at John; he had a very solemn look on his face. 

          John covered Charles up with a blanket and asked me to come outside with him.  He told me that Charles had Cholera, a result of infected water or food.  He told me that it normally comes after heavy rains and that it usually kills the victim in a day or two. John also said that all we could do was let him rest.  The train decided to rest for a day, to help not only Charles, but the rest of us as well.

          I stayed inside with Charles as he slept.  Sarah came and sat with me for a while.  She listened as I cried and told her my fears of him dying.  She reminded me that I needed to stay positive.  Charles needed me to be there for him, so I did all that I could to keep busy and take care of him in any way that I could.

          John came and checked on him periodically during the day.  By the evening, Charles was beginning to get worse.  His cramps were almost unbearable, and he slipped in and out of consciousness.   I tried hard to stay strong, but it was difficult.  It was so hard to watch him suffer.

          Late that night Charles died.  He told me to take care of our baby and raise it well.  He said to live life to the fullest and never give up, even when times get tough.  He wanted me to stay strong for our child. The last thing that he said was that he loved me. I don’t think I will ever forget that moment. 

          It felt as though a part of me had left with him. How could I continue to go on without Charles with me?  How could I raise a child on my own?  What would I do when we got to Oregon?  Who would drive the wagon?  How could I purchase property?  I had lots of questions, but very few answers.  It was not going to be easy.

          We had a short funeral for Charles the next day.  The pain was almost unbearable.  The only thing that kept me from giving up was the child that was growing inside of me.  I wanted to give him or her a good live in a new land.  Some way or another I was going to make it. 

          John offered to drive my wagon while another boy drove his.  It was a long journey and each day I grew lonelier.  If Sarah wouldn’t have been there for me, I don’t know what I would have done.  I appreciated my friend so much.  It was so nice to have someone there to listen.  I told her of my fears, and she offered to help in any way that she could. 

          The wagon master figured that we had about three weeks left of traveling.  If only Charles could have held out.  He was so close to achieving his dream.  It was depressing to think about how close he came, so I decided to look forward to the future.  I would never forget my life with Charles, but I didn’t want to dwell on the past.  He would always have a special place in my heart.    

          We traveled hard each day.  You could almost taste the anticipation in the air as we got closer to the valley.  We began to grow impatient as the days went on.  It seemed like we would never reach our destination. 

          At last, I saw it.  We reached the Willamette Valley.  It was so beautiful; there was lush vegetation and lots of trees.  It seemed perfect.  If only Charles could have been there to see it.  People began to celebrate all around me.  I couldn’t believe that we actually made it!

          John and Sarah told me that I could live with them for a while.  A widowed woman could not live on her own, especially not right away.  I was glad for the opportunity to stay with them, and it would be easier when the child came.

          We stayed in town while the men built the house. They wanted to hurry and get it done before winter set in.  It was going to take about a month to build.  In the meantime, Sarah and I spent time shopping around and buying clothes for our babies.  Buying the clothes made me even more excited for the child to arrive, but every time I looked at a piece of clothing, I couldn’t help thinking of Charles.  I missed him so much.

          Finally the time came for us to move in.  John and Sarah had a beautiful piece of land.  A small creek ran through the backyard; it was perfect.  A few big evergreen trees surrounded their house and some wild flowers grew nearby.  It looked like painting from a picture.

          As the time grew closer for Sarah’s baby to arrive, we grew more and more excited.  She began to pick out some names.  If it was a girl, she hoped to name her Hannah, and if it was a boy, she wanted to name him Jonathan, after his father.  She was getting bigger everyday.  We knew it wouldn’t be much longer.

          Finally the day arrived.  It was a cool, rainy day.  Thankfully we didn’t have to go into town to get a doctor, John delivered a healthy baby boy.  They decided to name him Jonathan Matthew. 

          Having a baby around made the quite a difference in our little household.  Jonathan cried late at night; I was glad to have a separate section of my own.  Sarah was busy trying to keep up with the washing and cooking.  I tried to help her as much as I could, but most of the time, I went off by myself.  I enjoyed walking along the creek to think and dream about things. 

          I thought about how different things would have been if Charles had made it.  We could have had a little house just like John and Sarah’s to call our own.  I wanted him to be here when the child would arrive.  He wanted children so much, and he would never be able to hold his own son or daughter.  Our child would never see it’s father, and someday I would have to explain why we were different from other families.  I was not looking forward to raising this child on my own.

          A few weeks later, it was my turn to deliver.  I was walking by the creek and my pains started.  I quickly walked back to the house and found John.  Soon after, I saw my baby girl for the first time. Holding her for the first time was an experience I will never forget.  She had her father’s eyes and nose.  By just looking at her sweet face, I knew I would never forget Charles.  In that moment of joy, sadness filled my heart, for my daughter would grow up without a father.

          I decided to name her Faith Elizabeth, for without faith I would have never survived the journey.  I had faith in Charles, and I had trusted him.  Even though he would never get the opportunity to hold our daughter, I knew that he would be proud.

          Now as I sit here, I think about how far I’ve come since we’ve arrived here, over fourteen years ago.  I have matured and changed in so many ways.  As I look back upon my life, I see how selfishly I lived.  If it wouldn’t have been for Sarah and John, I know I wouldn’t be where I am today. They helped me to look beyond myself, and appreciate what I have.

Faith is fourteen now, and she looks more like her father every day.  My new husband Samuel and I have been married for twelve years.  I received my wish, and we live in our own home in the country.  Samuel works on our farm while I teach our children. Sam is ten, James is seven, and Julie is five.  I love my new family more than I ever thought was possible. 

Even though I am happily married to Samuel, I will never forget Charles.  He will always have a special place in my heart.  Sometimes life takes you on a ride you aren’t prepared for, but never give up and always hold on tight, for you never know what is going to happen.  You must always be ready to face whatever challenges rise up.

My life was not easy, and I made lots of mistakes; however, I am happy for the way things have turned out. You see, the tough times that I went through were really blessings in disguise.  They were hard to see at first, but now I know that I am truly blessed.

 


FIRST PLACE – ESSAY

Child and Teen Obesity

By S. Vanhooser

Waller Junior High School

Enid, Oklahoma

Teacher:  Sheryl Douma – Grade 9

 

 

One of the most alarming and fast-rising epidemics is child and teen obesity.  According to www.drgreene.com, more teens are overweight now than at any other time in history.  This is scary, but really, not all that surprising. Consider taking out all of the soda and “Super-Sized” hamburgers and fries that are in our diets: cutting down on the number of unhealthy foods we eat would undoubtedly cut down on the number of overweight people.  Read on, and we’ll discover what we AREN’T doing and what we SHOULD be doing to stop this wildfire of obesity.

“Super-Size it, please.” 

“I’ll have the extra-value meal.”

“Mom, can I have a Big Mac?”

We’ve all heard these statements before, and we’ll all hear them again.  One of the most surprising things, though, is when one of these statements come out of a child’s mouth.  “Mom, can I have a Big Mac?” only adds to the fact that anywhere from 50 to 80% of obese children become obese adults. Is this what YOU would want for your children?  Do you want them to grow up to be obese when all they had to do is eat right and exercise when they were young? That is certainly NOT what I would want.  As quoted by Dr. Beth Abramson, a cardiologist and a spokesperson of the Heart and Stroke Foundation of Canada: “Teens have to get the message that they may be at risk for heart disease.  It starts early, but it can be prevented early.” To stop this rising epidemic, we must  start changing our lifestyles and stop the bad habits.

Many things make it hard for adolesents to try to lose weight.  One thing is the fact that in most of the schools around America, there are vending machines.  Fast food seems to be taking over America, and HAVE to take control of this problem.  Should we, for starters, take vending machines out of schools? Many states are already considering this option.  As of late February 2004, some two dozen states have considered placing a total ban or limit on vending machine products.  I personally think that this is a good idea.  I can say that I know many a person who saves their lunch money and instead ‘hits the vending machines’.  Unfortunately, this occurs a lot, and you can see how eating junk food instead of lunch would eventually lead to obesity.

 

Another astounding fact is that one out of every three hundred children have juvenile diabetes (March 2, 2003 edition of The Wall Street Journal).  Although granted that not all of these cases of diabetes is related to obesity, you could certainly see the link between the two problems.  Again, considering that 50 to 80% of obese children grow up to become obese adults... this epidemic has spread far enough.  So how do we stop it?


Stop ‘feeding’ (literally) the bad habits that we’ve fallen into: no more Super-Sized fries, no more King-Size-Jumbo-Extra-Large pop drink very time you stop at the gas station, and no more 5-hour-T.V. marathons! Only half of all children say they participate in at least some physical activity at least once a week.  This is a bad habit we’ve developed, America, and we’ve got to get out of it.  Why? Not just to save our lives...it’s actually costing us money.  It’s costing more for healthcare and more for diagnostic treatments, and it is costing America money in lost productivity rates.  The cost of lost productivity related to obesity is and average of $3.9 BILLION dollars a year.  That’s amazing! These obese adults (who grew from the 50-80% of obese children) are costing our country money. Just one more reason why we need to control this problem.

Now you’ve seen an inside look at the most alarming epidemic that’s spreading across America.  Do you consider yourself obese? What are you doing about it? Are you helping to eradicate the wildfire of obesity? Or are you just helping to ‘feed’ the flames?


SECOND PLACE – ESSAY

 

Underage Drinking

By A. Mann

Satanta High School

Satanta, Kansas

Teacher:  Karen Burrows – Grade 11

 

 

In 1984, a federal law required that states set 21 as the legal age for the purchase or public possession of alcoholic beverages. The states that did not follow this new law would lose a portion of their federal highway construction funding. The federal law was linked to the highway construction funding because of evidence that showed lower drinking ages resulted in more traffic fatalities involving young drivers according to the website Safe and Sober at www.nhtsa.dot.org. This proves that younger drinkers are less responsible drinkers.

 If teenagers could handle drinking responsibly, it would be okay, but teenagers don’t understand the consequences of drinking. Wait, I take that back; they do understand what can happen, but the attitude of “it won’t happen to me” is where the problem lies.

Many teenagers suffer from alcohol poisoning and aren’t even aware of it. They get into a drinking game, drink entirely too much in a short period of time and pass out or vomit.

I speak from experience. I am one of those irresponsible underage drinkers. I never thought that I could be seriously hurt from drinking. I thought if I drank enough until I started feeling good and then stopped, I would just end up getting sick and be fine again. But on April 20, 2002, I received a reality check. I was doing what a lot of kids my age would be doing on a Friday night, drinking with some of my friends. I drank too much, too fast in a short amount of time and got alcohol poisoning. The last thing I remember was being held in the arms of a police officer until the ambulance arrived. When I woke up, the faces of my angry parents snapped me back to reality. I had alcohol poisoning and had almost died. I believe that the 1984 law is a good thing; after all, it keeps underage drinkers who aren’t very responsible from ending their lives early as I almost did.

Teenagers often blame drinking on boredom, and I think that it is a big reason why teenagers drink. But how hard are they trying to find something to do? Not very. Just as easily as someone can get a case of beer, they can be playing a game of basketball or watching a movie. Drinking isn’t the only answer to boredom.

Alcohol is too accessible. Underage drinkers can get alcohol in hardly any time at all. They get it from older friends who say they can remember back in the day when they used to ask people to buy them beer, so why not? Too many teenagers have “buyers.” These “buyers” are not doing any good for these underage drinkers. If something were to happen to the teenager drinking, the buyer takes the blame.

Teenagers today need to wait to drink until they are 21 when they are more mature and have more life experience. A lot of accidents could be prevented. So instead of saying, ”Hey, lets drink,” how about actually trying to find something else to do? Because I know I CAN have fun without being wasted, I CAN find things to do if I try hard enough and I CAN wait until I’m 21 to drink any more alcohol.


THIRD PLACE – ESSAY

 

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By C. Rudolf

Beulah Middle School

Beulah, North Dakota

Teacher:  Amy Benz – Grade 8

 

A perfect country.  A perfect world.  Many people know that this is quite impossible.  But many of us still dream about living in a perfect nation without crime, abortion, abuse and poverty.  I am one of these people, who almost every day, think and dream of what America would be like without all these imperfections.  I wonder about families living in poverty, just managing to get by in life.  My dream for America is that all children will have food, families will have a house to live in and keep warm, and no one would be living in poverty.

 

America is the richest country in the world, but that does not mean that it does not have its faults, too.  According to National Geographic, 12.7% of America’s population is living in poverty.  That is around 35 million people in this country alone.  Children make up about 36% of that total.

That percent is growing each year.  I think how lucky I am to have a house, food, and clothing that I need, and even the extra things I am privileged to get.  I can’t even imagine living out on the streets day after day trying to get by.

 

Even though many people in America are devoting their time to help those less fortunate, every person in America needs to make an effort to do what they can.  According to the United States Department of Agriculture’s Economic Research Service, 100 billion pounds of food is wasted in the United States each year.  Many people around America and even the world would be overjoyed to receive that food and we are just throwing it out.

 

There are many rich and famous people in this nation and world who have billions of dollars and everything they could ever need or want.  Many of these people are very generous and share much of this money with the poor and underprivileged.  I admire them greatly for that and yet I wish that more people will billions of dollars or just a normal family with a normal income would donate money or even time to help less fortunate.

 

I do not know if my dream will ever come true, but I will continue to dream.  I will also try and continue to do my part and be thankful for all I have.  I know my voice may not make a huge difference, but now it is at least heard.

 


HONORABLE MENTION – ESSAY

 

Flying With the Wright Brothers

By G. Meyer

Jefferson Elementary

Conception, Missouri

Teacher: Renee Wilcox - Grade 5

 

An airplane soars overhead with ultra-fast speed.  Could it be containing passengers, headed to some distant place on this amazing flying craft, much faster than any other method of transportation?  Or could it be an Army plane, carrying out a mission on the fastest way to travel?  With the ability of flight we have opened thousands of doors.  But who do we owe this magnificent aviation device?  Who gets credit for the amazing machine that has become a part of our everyday lives?  None other than Wilbur and Orville Wright.

Susan Wright gave birth to Wilbur Wright on April 16, 1867.  Orville was born into the family four years later on August 19.  They became as close as twins.  The Wright brothers played together, lived together, went to school together, and Wilbur once said they thought together!  Since the Wrights were a little poor, the brothers rarely got new things.  So they often made their own.  Orville and Wilbur liked inventing, and this is why they even thought up the idea of a powered flight.  A toy might have also helped in the invention of the airplane.  This toy was a miniature helicopter which had two propellers connected to a rubber band.  The brothers were fascinated with this gift from Bishop Wright, their father.  It sparked an interest in flight for Wilbur and Orville.

          It was their father who taught the boys to stick to whatever they were doing and always, no matter the troubles, do their best.  But it was probably their mother who passed down the genes that let the Wright brothers’ posses a knowledge of mechanics and the skills to use them.  Bishop Wright had trouble driving a nail straight.

     As they aged, Orville grew an interest in printing.  We made his own press out of junkyard scraps.  During his summer breaks he worked for a local printer as an apprentice.  While in his junior year, he made an even bigger press with Wilbur's help.  Orville was so convinced that printing was his dream job he dropped out of school to start a printing business.  Orville's first paper was the weekly West Side News.  While Orville was the publisher, Wilbur was the paper's editor.  After a year of successful printing the Wright brothers changed the West Side News to the daily Evening Item.  The Evening Item did everything it could to stay afloat amongst other big name Dayton printers but soon drowned.  After talking the each other, the brothers decided to start a company that would print business cards, posters, and many other things. 

During all of this bicycles were growing safety as well as popularity.  The Wrights joined thousands in falling under their charming spell.  When your bike broke down, you would take it to the Wright brothers.  Upon this the brothers decided on yet another job switch.  The bike trade became theirs in 1892, when they founded the Wright Cycle Company.  First they were known for just repairing bikes, but soon they grew to selling their own series.  Mostly homemade, these bikes were much cheaper than other more expensive brands.  With much free time during the off season, the brothers made many additions to the house and shop, but the idea you are probably most concerned about was being developed in the back of the bike shop. 

     Many people before the Wright brothers had investigated and experimented with flight.  One of these many people was named Otto Lilienthal.  He conducted lots of gliding experiments in Germany.  The brothers had heard of him and he stirred up many thoughts in the two brilliant minds of Wilbur and Orville Wright.  Could powered flight be possible?  Yes, was the answer in the Wright's minds, but how to do it was a complete other question.  During the spring of 1899, Wilbur Wright wrote a letter to the Smithsonian Institution.  In it was a question of whether they would send information of previous flying attempts.  The Institution responded by sending numerous pamphlets and books, including those by Samuel Langley and Octave Chanute.  Advice was sought for and found in both men.  Chanute became a good friend and supporter of the brothers.  He gave them all the information he could of his flying experiments.

          While the Wright brothers were studying flight they learned three properties they needed in powered flight.  Wings were used to achieve lift.  Something to propel the plane and something more to steady the plane were both needed.  The power of the airplane designed, just waiting to be built.  Control was the problem.  For left and right movement a rudder was used.  A sideways rudder, called an elevator, was being used on submarines for the up and down movements, but people wondered whether this would work for a flying craft.  Not too many earlier inventors had paid much attention to the element of control.  They were focused on getting themselves into the air.  Orville and Wilbur found this amazing for they thought that balance and control were essential to a good flight.

          The Wright brother's first important discovery of how to make their plane came while watching buzzards over their hometown.  They saw the birds using their wings to revolve around.  Orville and Wilbur wondered how to harness this in airplane wings.  The solution came to Wilbur when serving a customer at the bike shop.  He, without thinking about it, twisted a box's ends in opposite directions.  He looked down and saw the answer in his hands.  Thus the brothers created their first experimental craft to test this theory.  They built a little kite that used what they called wing warping, and it responded to Wilbur's every move.  To make better test flights, they needed a good windy place.  So they contacted the U.S. Weather Bureau.  They chose Kitty Hawk out of the choices provided.  It was a remote fishing village in North Carolina.  There was a lot of sand there for soft landings, so Kitty Hawk sounded ideal.  So off they headed to their testing site after bike season was over that year.  They had a little trouble getting there but finally cruised into the harbor onboard the Curlicue.  They stayed at the local postmaster's house until they could set up camp a mile away.  There they tested many gliders and kites, going back home during biking season to continue their business and build better gliders.  After three long years, many trials and errors, and lots and lots of flying tests, Orville laid on airplane bottom for the last test on December 17, 1903.  He had won the coin toss and was headed down the runway.  He could feel himself rising in the air.  As Orville rose into the air he braced himself for a sure fall, but that fall did not come.  He was flying!  Orville Wright was the first person to fly a motorized craft.  They had done it!

          They reported to the press that they had flown, but not many printed it and even fewer readers believed.  Before the airplane became a practical invention, the must show it could make longer flights.  To improve the plane they flew in a friend's pasture, but it was very bumpy.  This presented a few problems.  Still they perfected the airplane and saw what it could really do.  On September 20, the first circle in the sky was flown.  The longest flight made here stretched five minutes as Wilbur flew around the 100-acre pasture four times.  More improvements were made, like separating the tail rudder controls from the wing warping, and the airplane became even better.  This airplane was the first practical airplane, for it could run as long as its fuel supply held.  After a bit, word got out about the strange flying contraption.  Still many people did not believe, for they thought human flight a true impossibity.

          For the next two and a half years the Wright brothers did not fly.  Until the patent rights were secured, they did not want anyone trying to steal their invention.  Repeated times did the brothers try to sell their creation to the U.S. War Department, but twice failed.  Despite the Army’s refusals to buy the plane, Orville and Wilbur were building an even better plane, where you could sit upright.  The Army was having doubts at their decision, so they got in touch with the Wrights.  After much discussion, a contract was made.  The French Government heard of the Wright brothers and soon another contract was made.  It was decided that Orville would stay to work on the airplane for the United States, while Wilbur sailed to France.        

          When Wilbur first came to Europe, many people did not believe, as in America.  But that soon changed on August 8 when Wilbur proved to be a true flyer.  After this display France went crazy with flying.  Many more flights were made and new records were set.  Madame Hart Berg became the first woman to fly.  Flying became everyone's dream, and happy was the soul who got to. 

          Across the globe, Orville was making ready for the demonstration to the U.S. Army.  On September 3, 1908, he flew off of the runway at Fort Myer.  From the start he soared as if he were a true bird of the air.  Thousands of people flocked to Fort Myer to see the amazing flying device.  But came that terrible day of September 17.  Orville was doing a normal flight with young lieutenant by the name of Thomas Selfridge.  On the fourth round the right propeller hit a bracing wire and sent the plane into a nosedive.  The lieutenant died of a fractured skull that evening.  Orville suffered multiple injuries, but his grip to life was too strong for him to die.  When Wilbur received the word of Orville's crash, he was restless.  He biked over to Le Mas, where he could accept telegraph messages quicker.  Wilbur blamed himself, no matter what anyone else said.  In 1909, just after being released from the hospital, Orville and his sister, Katherine, made the journey to France.  The three met in Paris and headed for Pau.  There they stayed and flew more.  They trained other pilots to follow in their footsteps.  In Pau they were very well-treated and respected.  After their time at Pau was up, they went to a few more stops in Europe.  But soon they turned their backs on Europe and went back home.  Here they were even more pampered. 

          Now came the time when the price of the airplane would be settled.  They would take a test to determine the average speed.  If it was 40 miles-an-hour, $25,000 would be the Wright's.  Every full mile-an-hour after that would get them an extra $2,500.  Since Orville had to choose another passenger, he chose a small 126 pound man named Foulois in hopes of narrowing his time.  When Orville and his passenger crossed the finish line, the clock marked 14 minutes and 12 seconds.  That meant that the average speed was 42.58 miles-per-hour.  This got the Wrights $5,000 dollars more.  Soon airplanes became a not so uncommon sight.  In August the first plane races were held.  On October 4 Wilbur flew 20 miles up the Hudson River before a million viewers.  In the same year the Wright brothers made their own company.  They shared ownership and made even more improvements on the airplane.  More and more people became pilots.  Firsts popped out of nowhere, like the first transcontinental flight.  For the last time Orville headed to Kitty Hawk.  Once more he glided on the newest version of glider.  Wilbur never got back to their old testing site.  He died of typhoid fever in 1912.  Dayton stood still on his funeral, for they knew they had lost a man who would be remembered in history forever.  When Wilbur died, Orville's desire to fly seemed to die with him.  In 1915, he sold interest in their company and retired to Hawthorn Hill.  There he stayed with his father and sister for the rest of his days.  He had his own private laboratory built into the home so he could tinker with whatever he wanted.  Orville had lived a full life and he had changed the way we travel.  So he was happy with what he had done during his lifetime when he died at the age of 66 pm January 30, 1948.  He and Wilbur had discovered and satisfied their life long dream of flying.

          The Wright brothers were the fathers of the airplane.  Even though the modern plane is constantly changing, they still are the founders.  We owe many wonderful things to the Wright duo.  We can get around the world much, much, faster than without the airplane.  For people who have travel as a normal, everyday thing, they thank the Wright brothers especially for this.  But that thanks does not match the pilot’s gratitude toward them.  For them flying is a passion, a passion that started with Wilbur and Orville.  They love flying, and the Wrights are the ones who made it possible.  So next time you see this amazing flying machine, you know who made it possible for it to be there.  The genius brothers named Wilbur and Orville Wright.